I try to write in other forms Stay up at night braining some storms But I get this - these bits of bliss my mind unwinds
© Stephen W. Buchanan 2021
Originally published advertising free at “If You Haven’t Got A Sonnet”
A Ha'Sonnet Will Do
I try to write in other forms Stay up at night braining some storms But I get this - these bits of bliss my mind unwinds
© Stephen W. Buchanan 2021
Originally published advertising free at “If You Haven’t Got A Sonnet”
terrific: love ‘braining some storms’ 🙂
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Thank you, John! I was very happy with that line. 😄
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Write what comes 👍
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Thank you, Mousey! 🙂 It can be annoying, though. I sometimes hear or think of a good line and automatically start trying to fit it into four beat lines.
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Have you considered writing sonnets as well? Just on the odd occasion of course. You would have more wiggle room with line length.
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I’d written a couple before I focussed so much on ha’sonnets. Now the lines are two beats more than my mind wants to go. 😁
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The mind knows what it wants. Provided the heart remains quiet 🤣
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😁
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And you do it extremely well too.
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Thank you very much! 😁
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