I've let it go
for far too long
But now I know
how it is wrong
You can go dwell
somewhere in hell
You’ve earned your burn
© Stephen W. Buchanan 2021
Originally published advertising free at “If You Haven’t Got A Sonnet”
A Ha'Sonnet Will Do
I've let it go
for far too long
But now I know
how it is wrong
You can go dwell
somewhere in hell
You’ve earned your burn
© Stephen W. Buchanan 2021
Originally published advertising free at “If You Haven’t Got A Sonnet”
Wow – harsh words there. What happened to ‘the best part of breakin’ up is makin’up’
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Like the commercial that says “The Best Part Of Wakin’ Up® is Folgers in your cup.” or people who say 10cc are the greatest band ever, some things are not universally true. 😁 Thanks!
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Love this my friend!!!
Somewhat gentle… but mighty!!
Brilliant combo of style and intent 👍🖤
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Thank you! Just what I was going for! 😁 I think this one may have been influenced by some of your poetry. 😉😁
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Haha! Well that influence goes both ways my friend 😊🖤
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😁👍🏻
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This is the most entertaining and best expressed go to hell I’ve ever read. One lady told me to go to hell and she didn’t know how to react when I said, “I hope you’ll join me.” in my sweetest voice.
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I’m happy you enjoyed it! 😁And that was quite the comeback! 😆
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Thanks. 😇
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Love the rawness and emotion in this poem. I feel this way about a few people, and this piece is the epitome of those negative emotions I feel. Some people really do earn that burn. Well said. 👏👏👏
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Thank you very much! There are some days and there are some people… 😈 (Sorry for the late response. Your comment was hidden in the spam folder.)
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I love the negative emotion expressed here, “You can go dwell somewhere in hell You’ve earned your burn”!!!
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Thank you! It still seems a bit “polite,” but it gets the feeling across. 😁
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It’s quite pungent! And I like it a lot.
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Pungent! I like that description! 😁
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😃👍
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Oh! Ouch!
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😁 I don’t remember who I was angry with when I wrote this.
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😂
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